Award Presentation for "Best U-Turn" in A Better Pair of Shoes "The Thinner Soul", a novel

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Nominations for "Best U-Turn" in the unfolding Suspended-Release Novel, A Better Pair of Shoes "The Thinner Soul" go to:

Kaylin, Radiance, Reece, and Jeff.

Excerpts for the Finalists:

Radiance- "We hadn't spoken everyday in a while. I knew from his voice that he knew where we were. When he arrived at my door, I could also tell by his eyes. We hugged for a long while, then he kissed me near my ear. I held his hand and led him to my closet.

'You'll never understand unless you see it.'

I reassured, and when he had seen it, he quickly backed out of the space.."

Jeff- "I sat on the edge of the bed prolonging my routine. It was definitely an end of the day type of conversation. I knew it was bigger than lunch. It had the feeling of a Sunday morning kind of dialogue, but I squeezed it into the middle of the week. I knew where she was in her process, and I was hoping that my tone wouldn't suggest that I'd been meditating on coming clean all day."

... and the Award for "Best U-Turn" goes to:

Radiance Dunbar

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